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Becky Strom's avatar

I am crying without reading the poem. The sadness breaks my heart. Know you aren’t alone with your gentle and tender spirit.

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Casey Bottono's avatar

This is one of the reasons we have poetry.

Thank you for honouring this little family.

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Helen Tremeer's avatar

Speaks to me on so many levels - thank you.

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Sunship Nonduality's avatar

"the saddest thing

is how certain she looked

as she stepped into

our forgetting" ... thank you for your words. this really captured something.

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Michelle Francois-Walsh's avatar

This fucking gutted me. I feel you friend.

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MommaMosh's avatar

I feel ya

I have had this visual for years. Same pond by the side of the highway; same instinct draws the pair to nest in its private enclosure of cattails.

Each year I wonder how they ever could get their little ones out safely?

Life is a wonder, and it sucks

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sophia schweitzer's avatar

"the terrifying heartbreak that comes from following someone who loves us into a world that no longer makes room for soft things." Sigh. These words, the poem.

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Ramona McKean's avatar

Oh, this hurts! And oh, indeed, it fits for far more than geese dying...

"my love,

something in

me crossed with them."

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Lesley Smith's avatar

This happened to me a month ago!!!! I was hoping they made it but I made the mistake of looking in my rear view mirror to see a cloud of feathers. I get sick to my stomach now when I pass the spot. I'm crying AGAIN....

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Laura Beasley's avatar

💔

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Ing Belill's avatar

Ohhhhhh my mama heart🥹 Felt this on a few levels…heartbreaking for certain.

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Phyllis Scantland's avatar

I feel this so deeply. Trusting that the future will bring a kinder,more loving world for us all and for our children and grandchildren with peace in this world instead of the anger and hatred that seems to be so prevalent. I don’t understand how we have reached this point and I don’t want to know. I want to be a part of the better way.

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Susan R. Pryde's avatar

This really breaks my heart on so many levels. Crying is the only relief.

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Däsha Millson's avatar

Those last two paragraphs broke my heart.

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